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Friday 3 May 2019

Going into another planet

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing to help us. first we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. finally we started our writing. I am sharing  it with you, please leave a comment. Thanks!
Think about using your senses. Smell, taste, hear, feel, see.
Remember to use correct punctuation and spelling.
Remember to use similes, and adjectives.
Use correct sentences.
Going into a different planet
When i was going in my ship i went to this unknown planet called tree planet .It was strange that people are turn into tree people because they have a king. Which is called grout the most powerful being in the galaxy. That they could ever turn back they would have to kill the king or make him happy. But however if kill the king you will be turn into the next king. But if you want it to end you'll have to kill yourself after you kill the king but it’s risky until Samoan killed the king and himself so i left. And i always told everyone. The end.