Tuesday 2 July 2019
Ruin
Warning
This story is only for 10 - 20 years old you have been worn
9.000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,0000 years ago there was a robot called Ruin he is a robot that looks like a human but he was not. He can do wifi produce and he is an id. Then he heard a sound so ran away as fast as he can then he got to his bike until he saw a ship the ship was trying to kill him. But he was too fast so the ship sent the drones the drones could catch up but he blow’d them up then he grabbed his sword and he hit the ship then it crash to slemareans but Ruin survived somehow i don’t no how he survived anyway after that he rebelled the city and everyone came back because he rebelled it they thank him and then he died. The end.
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Kia ora Katene.
ReplyDeleteI read your blog even though you wrote it was for 10 to 20 years old. Since I have just turned 21 I thought it would be ok to read it.
Interesting story with a sad end for Ruin.Can you please tell me what id is short for?and maybe next time you could use more punctuation.